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Guardian of Poison - Venima by SweetLhuna Guardian of Poison - Venima by SweetLhuna
This is Venima, the Poison Guardian.

That's the first time I already have the name for
the Guardian :D! I hope you like her! She's really cunning, even if she looks dark, she's really nice with people.

I would like to thanks ~Luirio who gave me the idea of making this dragon a dark green dragoness with a scorpion's like tail. Thanks!

Other Guardians:

Darkness


Fear


Wind


Water


Venima belongs to me *SweetLhuna
Artwork by me *SweetLhuna
Thanks to ~Luirio for the scorpion tail idea!

Next Guardian: Wind or Light
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Critique by sahmIam Jun 3, 2010, 8:12:06 PM
A great use of color here though the back ground could be better... the 'posion' effect is really nice and the shading goes to show that art isn't flat! Great job with this and the patterns are VERY original! Yur signature matches the back ground and the character perectly. Agian with your shading, it makes the drago sparkle! Your anotomy could be better, such as the under-belly being 'fatter' and the neck being thicker. The splatered wings show how it may be posioness but not to 'deadly', as in friendly or nice. The character 'build' is original yet I can't help thinking of Spyro a bit. But keep up the great work!

-SahmIam
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Sorry for the late critique! I just got out of school!

This piece of artwork is pretty top notch! I love the details and patterns~ The anatomy seems pretty accurates well. The claws on the dragon really stand out and so does the end claw of the tail- very interesting touches.

I give you 4.5/5 stars for vision because it seems that the image seems to refect what you wanted to portray.

Originality is always difficult to get down pat, and this image isn't "original" because there are many pictures of neon green dragons. To bump up your originality and technique you should try maybe introducing the character into a background- I could see this dragon strolling through a very urban part of town or in a poisonous area

Your technique is pretty constant throughout. If you need help with sahding techniques there are always some great tutorials out there! :)

Impact is great! Very neat and at first glance there is much emotion and such. I also love the little sloptches on the wing.

Keep going in your art career! Your doing a great job!
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VioletHybrid Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Student Filmographer
Is it still alright that i use Venima... i'm just being sure of thigns
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SweetLhuna Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Just give me credits in your description, with a link to my profile, please!
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VioletHybrid Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012  Student Filmographer
:3 np ^^ *writes that down*
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Gamerdragon1992 Featured By Owner May 5, 2011  Student
Woow, she looks so awesome
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Horrordragon339 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
whoa now that's cool
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Goldcoast456 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2010
omg she is soo cool!
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Ligarththedragon Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
I like how you did her wings, they look messy like a poison dragon's proberbly would :D
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SweetLhuna Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Ehehe thanks <3!
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Ligarththedragon Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
shiny again :D
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veronicacerros Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG I love the dragon, as well as the green sparkly-looking background, She is Gorgeous :D
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SweetLhuna Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks <3
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Fire-Flame-Fan Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2010
It's one of the coolest designs I've ever seen! o3o I love how those wings looks like, and pose is great! :la:
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SweetLhuna Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Aaaw thank you so much :iconiloveitplz:
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Fire-Flame-Fan Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2010
You're welcome! :D
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Starcraft3000 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
beautiful works
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greendragon22 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2010  Hobbyist
She's beautiful.
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SweetLhuna Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :D
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Masterblaster1234 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2010
now that is a visicous looking dragon
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SweetLhuna Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
xD!
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Masterblaster1234 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2010
your welcome you are the best artist in making pictures i have ever seen i have some spyro and cynder stories if you want to read them just let me know if you like them.
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SweetLhuna Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Alright!
Thank you so much :P But there's sooo much people better than me x)
Takes a look at those artist! *Cynder-and-spyro-fan :shalone-sk:
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Masterblaster1234 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2010
Shalone is one of my friends and i have to admit he is great to. But you are phenonible
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SweetLhuna Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
looThanks <3
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Masterblaster1234 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2010
welcome
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SweetLhuna Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
lot of thanks*
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Masterblaster1234 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2010
your welcome
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yui223555 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2010
very nice
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Rethiamat Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2010
Now THIS looks good! I like the patterns you've got on her wings and legs, and the scorpion-like tail and armor-like ridge on her back is wicked! The frills on her face are a nice touch too! A fav for sure!
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SweetLhuna Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! <3! I'm so glad you like it! <3
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Demus22 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2010
She look amazing!!!

Her scales looks great and I like a lot her scorpion tail and the drops of poison of her tail, claws and tongue... Just remember me never kiss her on the lips... :rofl:
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SweetLhuna Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Ahaha! I love your comment! :D
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Demus22 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2010
Thanks :) and I love your art!
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SweetLhuna Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Im glad you like <3!
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Demus22 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2010
:D
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kruddthedragonboy Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Nice
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lizarfan1 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
looks very good i love spyro and his characters very much qand your chracter is great i am making the guardians of poison,fear,wind,water and even darkness
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SweetLhuna Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
That's what I'm doing but I'll also do other guardian, like light, moonlight, metal... ect :)
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lizarfan1 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
ok and firedor guardian of lava brother of ignitus
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SweetLhuna Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
That's is a good idea :)
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lizarfan1 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
tyhank you
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armoredlightdragon Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
wow i feel poisoned gast looking at her
faved
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KrazyKat4 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2010
cool I always did think poison wuz greenX)
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SweetLhuna Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
xD
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MyraDragon80 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2010
Amazing
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adsinicat Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
wow fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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SweetLhuna Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Thx <3
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Le-Poney-Dragonique Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2010
So nice...i would not like to be her enemies because each guardian master the element so Venima master the poison and she got the most destructible poison that never existed...a mix of neurotoxic venom and inflammable poison so if someone got hit by the sting or by her claw he get a serious burns around the wound
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SweetLhuna Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah xD
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animalpainter Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That is AWESOME!!! So faved!! I don't know why, but something about her facial expression reminds me of Cynder from Spyro? lol
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SweetLhuna Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah me too xD
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