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Guardian of Poison - Venima by SweetLhuna Guardian of Poison - Venima by SweetLhuna
This is Venima, the Poison Guardian.

That's the first time I already have the name for
the Guardian :D! I hope you like her! She's really cunning, even if she looks dark, she's really nice with people.

I would like to thanks ~Luirio who gave me the idea of making this dragon a dark green dragoness with a scorpion's like tail. Thanks!

Other Guardians:

Darkness


Fear


Wind


Water


Venima belongs to me *SweetLhuna
Artwork by me *SweetLhuna
Thanks to ~Luirio for the scorpion tail idea!

Next Guardian: Wind or Light
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Critique by sahmIam Jun 3, 2010, 8:12:06 PM
A great use of color here though the back ground could be better... the 'posion' effect is really nice and the shading goes to show that art isn't flat! Great job with this and the patterns are VERY original! Yur signature matches the back ground and the character perectly. Agian with your shading, it makes the drago sparkle! Your anotomy could be better, such as the under-belly being 'fatter' and the neck being thicker. The splatered wings show how it may be posioness but not to 'deadly', as in friendly or nice. The character 'build' is original yet I can't help thinking of Spyro a bit. But keep up the great work!

-SahmIam
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Sorry for the late critique! I just got out of school!

This piece of artwork is pretty top notch! I love the details and patterns~ The anatomy seems pretty accurates well. The claws on the dragon really stand out and so does the end claw of the tail- very interesting touches.

I give you 4.5/5 stars for vision because it seems that the image seems to refect what you wanted to portray.

Originality is always difficult to get down pat, and this image isn't "original" because there are many pictures of neon green dragons. To bump up your originality and technique you should try maybe introducing the character into a background- I could see this dragon strolling through a very urban part of town or in a poisonous area

Your technique is pretty constant throughout. If you need help with sahding techniques there are always some great tutorials out there! :)

Impact is great! Very neat and at first glance there is much emotion and such. I also love the little sloptches on the wing.

Keep going in your art career! Your doing a great job!
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katehedgehog Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Student Filmographer
Is it still alright that i use Venima... i'm just being sure of thigns
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SweetLhuna Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Just give me credits in your description, with a link to my profile, please!
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katehedgehog Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012  Student Filmographer
:3 np ^^ *writes that down*
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Gamerdragon1992 Featured By Owner May 5, 2011  Student
Woow, she looks so awesome
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Horrordragon339 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
whoa now that's cool
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Goldcoast456 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2010
omg she is soo cool!
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Ligarththedragon Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
I like how you did her wings, they look messy like a poison dragon's proberbly would :D
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SweetLhuna Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Ehehe thanks <3!
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Ligarththedragon Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
shiny again :D
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veronicacerros Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG I love the dragon, as well as the green sparkly-looking background, She is Gorgeous :D
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